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Describe the diagram of manufacturing beer

Describe the diagram of manufacturing beer 21wx

The figure illustrates the different steps used to manufacture beer. Overall, there are eleven stages in the process, beginning with the milling of malted barley and ending with packaging the beer. Looking at the pre-fermentation stages of the process, we can see that in order to get liquid from malted barley, it has to be milled, mashed with water and lautered in special tanks. In order to get a pure liquid, the spent grain is taken out and used for the feeding of animals. Then, the liquid has to be boiled with sugar and hops and mixed in a whirlpool before cooling. In the remaining stages, the cooled liquid is fermented by adding yeast and during the process, carbon dioxide is extracted. Then, it is transferred to storage tanks, in order to be matured. In the second to last stage, the matured beer is transferred to a filter for filtering. Finally, the beer is packed in either bottles, barrels or put in tanker trucks for delivery.

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different
 steps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to manufacture beer. Overall
, there are eleven You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 in the process, beginning with the milling of malted barley and ending with packaging the beer.

Looking at the Possible spelling mistake found.
pre-fermentation
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stages
 of the process, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 liquid from malted barley, it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be milled
, mashed with water and Possible spelling mistake found.alteredlayeredmasteredbatteredcateredlettered
lautered
 in special tanks. In order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a pure liquid, the spent grain is taken
 out and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for the feeding of animals. Then, the liquid This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be boiled
 with sugar and hops and mixed in a whirlpool This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 cooling.

In the remaining You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
, the cooled liquid is fermented
 by adding yeast and during the process, carbon dioxide is extracted
. Then, it is transferred
 to storage tanks, in order to be matured
. In the second to last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, the matured beer is transferred
 to a filter for filtering. Finally
, the beer is packed
 in either bottles, barrels or put in tanker trucks for delivery. 