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Table showing the television viewing figures for tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics

Table showing the television viewing figures for tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics 3Ymyn
The table shows how many people in some countries watch sport programs on televisions. There are 4 countries mentioned in the table: Australia, UK, USA and Canada. Types of sports includes tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics. Among those four countries, the USA ranks first with the highest number of people watching sports on TV. There are 25. 2 millions American people view television for sports. The country with the lowest number is Canada - there are only 14. 5 millions Canadian TV viewers who are interested in this kind of program. In Australia, UK and Canada, the most interested sport is Tennis. The numbers of spectators of this sport program in those countries are respectively 6. 2; 6. 6 and 6. 1 millions people. Meanwhile, American TV viewers like golf the most. There are 11. 2 viewers in the USA watch this sport. Tennis is quite popular in this country; so it ranks second with 7 millions viewers. Because of the very high number of American viewers, golf is the sport most watched - It is viewed by 26. 9 millions spectators in four countries. The most uncommon sport TV program in four countries is motor racing - which attracts only 12. 7 millions viewers in four countries. It also has the smallest number of viewers in the USA and Canada (respectively 1. 5 and 1. 1 millions viewers). To sum up, the popularity of tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics programs is different among those four countries. P/S: This is the first time I wrote for an IELTs Task 1. I feel very confused and difficult. I have read the instructions in the book but do not understand much about how to apply those instructions. Thanks for any comments for this post.
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on televisions. There are 4
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includes tennis, golf, motor racing and athletics.

Among those four
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Canadian TV
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In Australia, UK and Canada, the most interested
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The most uncommon
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