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The chart gives information about Someland's main exports in 2000, 2005 and 2015.

The chart gives information about Someland's main exports in 2000, 2005 and 2015. WYB8a
The bar chart compares three main export products of Someland, namely meat, dairy products, and international tourism, in the years 2000, 2005, and 2015. Overall, dairy products and international tourism were favored by overseas countries, taking the highest rank in Someland’s exports. Whereas meat products were the lowest exports and experience a downward trend during the period. Looking at the beginning of the period, tourism exports were the most profitable industry in Someland, with the revenue acquired for over 6 billion dollars in 2000. Over the next 5 years, the figure for international tourism saw a slight increase by under 1 billion dollars, and then it became the dominant industry with approximately 8 billion dollars revenue in 2015. Turning to dairy products, in 2000, the revenue from the exportation of dairy products stood at 5 billion dollars. For the following 5 years, foods and beverages made from milk became the most consuming products by foreign countries, which increase the revenue from dairy products export by approximately 8 billion dollars in 2005. After reaching the peak, the figure for exporting dairy products saw a slight decline by under 1 billion dollars at the end of the period. In contrast, during the period, the figure for exporting meat dropped from 4 to 3 billion dollars, becoming the lowest revenue from exportation among three industry.
The bar chart compares three main
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Someland
,
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meat,
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dairy
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products
, and international
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tourism
, in the years 2000, 2005, and 2015.

Overall
,
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dairy
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products
and international
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tourism
were favored
by overseas countries, taking the highest rank in
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Someland
’s
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exports
. Whereas meat
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products
were the lowest
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exports
and experience a downward trend during the period.

Looking at the beginning of the period,
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tourism
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exports
were the most profitable industry in
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Someland
, with the
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revenue
acquired for over 6
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billion
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in 2000. Over the
next
5 years, the figure for international
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tourism
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a slight increase by under 1
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billion
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, and then it became the dominant industry with approximately 8
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in 2015.

Turning to
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dairy
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, in 2000, the
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from the exportation of
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stood at 5
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. For the following 5 years, foods and beverages made from milk became the most consuming
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products
by foreign countries, which increase the
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from
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by approximately 8
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in 2005. After reaching the peak, the figure for exporting
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dairy
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products
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a slight decline by under 1
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at the
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end
of the period.

In contrast
, during the period, the figure for exporting meat dropped from 4 to 3
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, becoming the lowest
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from exportation among three industry.
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