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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. rqyJ
These diagrams shows machine made to make energy from waves and its location. It is clear from the graph that it is a little complicated. According to what is shown, it seems that waves are going inside the machine and the water levels rise. Then, the air flow will move the turbine that are connected with an electricity generator. And finally air flow go outside from the top. While, if want put this machine in large waves place you will need high installion cost but it gives you high output. On the contracy, if you install it in small waves place, you will need less money but it will gives you low output. To sum up, we could say that it is actually a machine and we see that if you want high output you nee to pay a lot. But if you can deal with low output, then, you will need less money to pay.
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machine
made to
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make
energy from
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waves
and its location. It is
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clear
from the graph that it is a
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little
complicated.

According to what
is shown
, it seems that
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waves
are going inside the
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machine
and the water levels rise. Then, the air flow will
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move
the turbine that
are connected
with an electricity generator. And
finally
air flow go outside from the top.

While, if want put this
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machine
in large
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waves
place you will need high
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installion
cost
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but
it gives you high output. On the
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contracy
, if you install it in
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small
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waves
place, you will need less money
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but
it will
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gives
you low output.

To sum up, we could say that it is actually a
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machine and
we
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see
that if you want high output you
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to pay a lot.
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But
if you can deal with low output, then, you will need less money to pay.

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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