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The given table shows us, the number of people who traveled abroad in 1990

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The given table shows us, the number of people who traveled abroad in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 in different areas. As we can see European people went to international travel more than the other part of the world. According to statistics, total number of international travels was about 449 million in 1990 and this number increased to 693. 7 million in 2005. 18. 2 million people who lived in Africa in 1990 traveled abroad and this number grew up to 28. 7 person in 2005. America was only part which experienced decrease in one the five years. The people who lived in America went to another countries 5 million travel less in 2005 than 2000. Asia and pacific had highest growth rate in international travels among all these parts. Asian persons went more than two times travels in 2005 as many in 1990. The people who inhabited in middle east went to international country less than the other parts in contrast, European people had the highest overseas travel. Overall, international travels went up in all parts of the world but from 1990 to 1995 oversea travels increased more than the other five years.
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, European
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had the highest overseas travel.

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from 1990 to 1995 oversea
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increased more than the other five years.
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