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The given table illustrates the population of women per 100 men

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The given table illustrates the population of women per 100 men in the six different areas in 1995 and 2005. According to decrease of women’s population in Asia, this continent had the highest ratio of women in both of these years. In contrast Europe had the least ratio of females in 1995 and 2005. African women ratio was 97. 8 per 100 men in 1995. This number increased to 99. 2 throw 10 years. Asian female ratio decreased slightly. In spite of that in 1995 and 2005, women population was about 5 percent more than men. In Europe population among gender didn’t distribute equally. Although 89. 4 in 1995 went up to 92. 8 but these numbers were far less than male population. In North and Central of America, male and female population were equal in 1995. However, these numbers experienced little decrease in 2005. In comparison to North and Central of America, the women who lived in Oceania were more than men in 1995 but, the number fell to 99. 8 female per 100 men in 2005. Overall, four out of six areas experienced downward trend and only Africa and Europe had upward trend. Also, in all areas except Asia and Europe men and women population were approximately the same.
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in Asia, this continent had the highest
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in both of these years. In
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Europe had the least
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African
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was 97. 8 per 100
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in 1995. This
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increased to 99. 2 throw 10 years. Asian
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were far less than male population.

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were equal in 1995.
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were approximately the same.
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IELTS academic The given table illustrates the population of women per 100 men

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