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The given representation of data shows a table which contains the results of a survey while bar graph represents the number of visitors who visited different destinations in between 1994 and 1998.

The given representation of data shows a table which contains the results of a survey while bar graph represents the number of visitors who visited different destinations in between 1994 and 1998. K3w7L
The given representation of data shows a table which contains the results of a survey while bar graph represents the number of visitors who visited different destinations in between 1994 and 1998. Overall, The most of people visited the Western Europe from 1994 to 1998. However, the main reason for visit was holiday for the same time period, also the overall numbers of visitor significantly increased in other destinations, But the total numbers of UK residents who travel to other countries were remain unchanged. By analysing data, The numbers of UK civilians who visited their friends or relatives to other part of world were drastically rose in 1998 compare to in 1995, Also there was a steady change in numbers of North America visitors from 1994 to 1998. There was a continuous rise in the visitors who visited abroad for a business purpose. In 1995, A numbers of traveler to the Western Europe significantly fell in compare to year of 1994, But after that there was a dramatic increase in traveler for the same part of the planet.
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the Western Europe from 1994 to 1998.
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travel to other countries were
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their friends or relatives to other part of world were
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abroad for a business purpose. In 1995, A
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after that there was a dramatic increase in traveler for the same part of the planet.
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IELTS academic The given representation of data shows a table which contains the results of a survey while bar graph represents the number of visitors who visited different destinations in between 1994 and 1998.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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