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Ielts writing academic flow chart

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The table shows the laundering refreshing process. It is clear that this operation has 10 different ordered stages, in addition all received objects go through them one after one. First, linen arrives at the washing center from supplies. Further, things received to the department are sorted and put into special containers. Next, clothes packed into the bags are loaded into washing machines where they are cleaned for 2 hours. Afterwards, each item dried up by pressure. According to the chart, after the draining operation all kinds of linen separated for two particular groups. First part of clothes, that is completely dry, is transported directly to the folder machine which is the last point of the whole laundering session. As for the second part of things, linen in which is half-wet, they are moved to the ironing after which there is no water at all, consequently later these products go to the folding, where all clothes unite again.
The table
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shows
the laundering refreshing process. It is
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clear
that this operation has 10
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different
ordered stages,
in addition
all received objects go through them one after one.

First
, linen arrives at the washing center from supplies.
Further
, things received to the department
are sorted
and put into special containers.
Next
, clothes packed into the bags
are loaded
into washing machines where they
are cleaned
for 2 hours. Afterwards, each item dried up by pressure. According to the chart, after the draining operation all kinds of linen separated for two particular groups.
First
part of clothes,
that is
completely dry,
is transported
directly
to the folder machine which is the last point of the whole laundering session. As for the second part of things, linen in which is half-wet, they are
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moved
to the ironing after which there is no water at all,
consequently
later these products go to the folding, where all clothes unite again.
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IELTS academic Ielts writing academic flow chart

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
157 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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