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The given pie charts show about average percentage the consumption of food in the world and two countries in 2008.

The given pie charts show about average percentage the consumption of food in the world and two countries in 2008. Lnx6

In detailed view, in 2008, the majority of fast food ate by whole world that was 41% whereas, India consumed 39% and 34% ate by China. Further, in the earth, 29% consumption of vegetables and fruits but in China 32% ate vegetables and fruits then India consumed 23 percent vegetables and fruits. Probing further, in India, 27 percent used of animal nutrient during 2008 but the globe consumed to 21% of the total then China utilized only 15 percent of animal nourishment. However, the number of nuts and seeds which consumed by China that was 19 percent and in India there was a decrease by 8 percent and in the whole society the consumption of nuts and seeds remained just 40 percent of the total in 2008. Overall, the highest ratio of frozen food consumed by all world and two countries and least nuts and seeds ate by three different societies.

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