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The given pie charts illustrates by percentage how the life threatening waste is being treated by three different countries in various ways.

The given pie charts illustrates by percentage how the life threatening waste is being treated by three different countries in various ways. RRro8
The given pie charts illustrates by percentage how the life threatening waste is being treated by three different countries in various ways. Overall, the Republic of Korea recycle most of their hazardous waste where as other two countries use underground dumping process mainly. Firstly, Republic of Korea recycled almost more than half of their harmful waste that is 69% where as Sweden only 25% sent to recycle. As for Sweden most of there waste that is 55% dump underground as compare to Korea only 22%. Last but not least, Korea and Sweden only 9% and 20% of it goes to incineration respectively. Secondly, in the United kingdom various methods are used for the dealing of harmful waste produced. The major percentage of it was handled by underground dumping that is 82%, where as 8% of it subjected to the chemical treatment whereas another 8% dump at the sea and only 2% of it goes to incineration process.
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