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The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. XYjP
The diagram highlights the process of the silkworm life cycle and also describe the process of production of silk cloth. Overall, the process of life cycle of the silkworm is fully naturally and cyclic manners and it is four-step process. Also, h can be seen that the process of silk cloth production is man made and linear process and it is a also four-step process. The life cycle of the silkworm to begins the eggs laid by the worm. after 10 days, it is generated into silkworm larva and that is eats to be like mulberry leaves. this stage is completes of the life cycle in 4 to 6 weeks. Next, the all create silk thread and after 3 to 8 days to create the cocoon. Finally, cocoon next 16 days after they become moth and same process re-start again. in terms of production of silk cloth, the cocoons all boiled in the water and the threads are unwound. These threads 300 to 600 metres long. Theirafter, some of these threads are twisted and dye, on the other hand others woven into silk cloth. Finally, both are ready to sales in the market.
The diagram highlights the
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process
of the silkworm
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life
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cycle
and
also
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describe
the
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of production of
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silk
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cloth
.
Overall
, the
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process
of
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life
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cycle
of the silkworm is
fully
naturally
and cyclic manners and it is four-step
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process
.
Also
, h can be
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seen
that the
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process
of
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silk
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cloth
production is
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man
made and linear
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process
and it is
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a
also
four-step
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process
. The
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life
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cycle
of the silkworm to
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begins
the eggs laid by the worm.
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after
10 days, it
is generated
into silkworm larva and
that is
eats to be like mulberry
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leaves
.
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this
stage is completes of the
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life
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cycle
in 4 to 6 weeks.
Next
, the all create
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silk
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thread
and after 3 to 8 days to create the cocoon.
Finally
, cocoon
next
16 days after they become moth and same
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process
re-
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start
again.
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in
terms of production of
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silk
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cloth
, the cocoons all boiled in the water and the threads are unwound. These threads 300 to 600
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metres
long.
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Theirafter
,
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some
of these threads
are twisted
and dye,
on the other hand
others woven into
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silk
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cloth
.
Finally
, both are ready to sales in the market.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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