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The given pictures highlights the process by which tomato ketchup is produced

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The given pictures highlights the process by which tomato ketchup is produced. There are 15 stages in the diagram, from picking tomatoes and putting in basket to eating with hamburger and fries. The first step is that whole ripe tomatoes are picked and put in basket and then farmers sort out good and bad tomatoes which way have a best goods to increase product value. Next, them are sent to factory. In here, after being removed stalk, seeds and skin, the tomatoes are then put in a container. In order to made a ketchup bottle, first of all a circle of stones is placed in the container to compress and crush the tomatoes and then the liquid is mixed with sugar, vinegar, salt. After boiling, workers leave them in two hours. Next, waiting for the mixture to cool down to room temperature, then pour it into the bottle. The ketchups will be put in the box immediately after being checked for quality At this point, They are distributed to supermarkets by food truck. The final step, Consumers buy it home and eat it with hamburgers and fries

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 pictures highlights the process by which tomato ketchup is produced
. There are 15 stages in the diagram, from picking tomatoes and putting in basket to eating with hamburger and fries.

The first
 step is that whole ripe tomatoes are picked
 and put in basket and then farmers sort out This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 tomatoes which way Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "has".has
have
Use "the" with the superlative.the
a
 best This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 to increase product value. Next
, them are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to factory. In here, after being removed
 stalk, seeds and skin, the tomatoes are then put in a container.

In order Did you mean "to make"?to make
to made
 a ketchup bottle, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
 a circle of stones is placed
 in the container to compress and crush the tomatoes and then the liquid is mixed
 with sugar, vinegar, salt. After boiling, workers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 them in two hours. Next
, waiting for the mixture to cool down to room temperature, then pour it into the bottle. The Possible spelling mistake found.ketchupketch ups
ketchups
 will be put
 in the box immediately after being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 for quality At this point, They are distributed
 to supermarkets by food truck. The final step, Consumers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it home and eat it with hamburgers and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfries.fries!fries?fries:fries,fries;
fries