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The line graph and the bar graph demonstrate the figure for monthly rainfall and temperature respectively in one area in East Africa.

The line graph and the bar graph demonstrate the figure for monthly rainfall and temperature respectively in one area in East Africa. kWOEM

The line graph and the bar graph demonstrate the figure for monthly rainfall and temperature respectively in one area in East Africa. Overall, it can be seen clearly that it is heavy rain in six months in one region of East Africa. The temperature is the highest in March and October, while the lowest temperature is belonged to July. Looking at the bar chart, the amount of rainfall of East Africa are the highest number from March to May and from October to December, while six months left have low rainfall at under 5 mm. April has the greatest amount of rain in the year at 270 mm, which was followed by May rainfall at nearly 140 mm. The figure for October and November rainfall share about 150 mm, which triple December rainfall. In the line graph, the temperature increases from January and reaches a peak at March at 27 °C, but later the temperature saw a considerable decline to July at 17 °C. The temperature increases again in October at 26 °C, when the rain starts heavier again.

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respectively
 in one area in East Africa.

Overall
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seen
clearly
 that it is heavy rain in six months in one region of East Africa. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 is the highest in March and October, while the lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
is belonged
 to July.

Looking at the bar chart, the amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowermoisturerain
rainfall
 of East Africa are the highest number from March to May and from October to December, while six months This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 have low You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowermoisturerain
rainfall
 at under 5 mm. April has the greatest amount of rain in the year at 270 mm, which was followed
 by May You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowermoisturerain
rainfall
 at nearly
 140 mm. The figure for October and November You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowermoisturerain
rainfall
 share about 150 mm, which triple December rainfall.

In the line graph, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 increases from January and reaches a peak at March at 27 °C, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 later the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
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saw
 a considerable decline to July at 17 °C. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 increases again in October at 26 °C, when the rain This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 heavier again. 