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The - given pictorial Illustration shows changes in the layout of a bookstore between 2000 and the present.

The - given pictorial Illustration shows changes in the layout of a bookstore between 2000 and the present. kWwbe
The - given pictorial Illustration shows changes in the layout of a bookstore between 2000 and the present. overall, the layout of the bookstare has been changed significantly, especially on the left of it. The number of facilities/ features have been moved and modified, while some new features have been added At a fleeting glance, it is apparent that in year 2000, there was a large section dedicated to fiction books on the left hand side of the stare However, that section has now been divided into four new sections which comprises books on art, hobbies, cookery and fiction The area for fiction books on the left corner of the storie is now used for non-fiction books, while the old non-fiction section has been transformed into a new cafe further observation, the central area of the store which was previously used for art, hobbies and cookery books is 1 being occupied by tabl clarins Meanwhile, the space for now travel books books and, new over the given time period
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pictorial Illustration
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shows
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changes
in the layout of a bookstore between 2000 and the present.

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overall
, the layout of the
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bookstare
has been
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changed
significantly
,
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on the
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left
of it. The number of facilities/ features have been
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moved
and modified, while
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some
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new
features have been
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added


At a fleeting glance, it is apparent that in year 2000, there was a large
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section
dedicated to fiction
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books
on the
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left hand
side of the stare
However
, that
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section
has
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now
been divided
into four
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new
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sections
which comprises
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books
on art, hobbies, cookery and fiction The area for fiction
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books
on the
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left
corner of the
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storie
is
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now
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used
for non-fiction
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books
, while the
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old
non-fiction
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section
has
been transformed
into a
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new
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cafe
further
observation, the central area of the store which was previously
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used
for art, hobbies and cookery
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books
is 1
being occupied
by
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tabl
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clarins
Meanwhile, the space for

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now
travel
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books
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books
and,
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new
over the
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IELTS academic The - given pictorial Illustration shows changes in the layout of a bookstore between 2000 and the present.

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168 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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