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Talk about the perfect house for you to live.

Talk about the perfect house for you to live. jVXV8

One of my dreams is to build my own house. It will be a two-storey building and located in Brasov, a central zone in Romania. This building would have at least 5 bedrooms and 2 bathrooms. I'm planning to have more children, and I want to manage that they will have their rooms. Also, one room will be for my parents because I feel more relaxed and secure when I have them with me. I want to be of great help to their elderly life. Another room will be for friends and visitors. The attic will be renovated into a small library. In addition, I will transform the basement into a game room, where will have a variety of games, such as rummy, chess, backgammon and also electronic games. For children, I would create a small playground with many toys. Also, I would like to arrange a special area for BBQ and a glasshouse in the garden for flowers. The reason I would choose Brasov as my neighbourhood city is because it is a touristic area with mountains and impressive forests, which will provide a great amount of fresh air. The climate is good and the winter season is the most outstanding event in everyone's life. The snow will cover every scenery in white and create a scene of fantasy story. The children would love to play and build their snowman. Turning back to my house, it will be near the two well-known old buildings, for instance, Bran and Peles. Due to the architectural style, the castles are the most visited in the country. Also, they are popular because of Dracula's movies.

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