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the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009

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The bar chart show the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009. Overall, all four chart there is greatly change their subject matter the number of sales. According to the chart, in 2006 to 2008 the United States was the most of the number of sales. In 2006 have the number of sale almost 250, 000, 2007 upward trend is 350, 000 and 2008 downward trend is 300, 000, while the least chart of the three is Japan have the number of sales almost 50, 000, 60, 000 and 100, 000 respectively. On the other hand, in 2009 the most significant amount is Japan almost 350, 000, while the least among is other almost 120, 000 and the remining is United states almost 300, 000.
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250, 000, 2007 upward trend is 350, 000 and 2008 downward trend is 300, 000, while the least
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of the three is Japan have the
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