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The given maps demonstrate the modification in architectural design of the ground floor of an unamely art gallery in two specific periods 2015 and present day.

The given maps demonstrate the modification in architectural design of the ground floor of an unamely art gallery in two specific periods 2015 and present day. m92m1
The given maps demonstrate the modification in architectural design of the ground floor of an unamely art gallery in two specific periods 2015 and present day. Overall, It is noticeable that there are four main aspects with regard to the changes in the ground floor, namely the exhibition room 4, the gallery office, the relocation of the receptionist, the addition of recreational amenities. Additionally, A Nobel zone for kids has been built in order to serve customers better. There have been some complete alternatives along with the right-wall exhibition during the two mentioned periods. In 2005, there was a café in the corner of the gallery's right wall. In the currents scheme, there are some additions to recreational amenities, namely the new gallery shop and the adjacent vending machine. In the present plan, the gallery office and the existed exhibition room 4 locating in the right of the 2005 map have been demolished whatwith give rooms for constructing new inner facilities such as a children area and a tempolary exhibition. A more detailed look at the present map shows that there has been a relocation of the receptionist from the middle to the top of the arcade compared to the past. In addition, customers used to frequent upstairs on foot, which has been better convenience in this day and age inasmuch as intaking a new elevator, putting the quality services on priority. Meanwhile, there have been no changes in the left-wall of the gallery throughout the mentioned periods.
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maps demonstrate the modification in architectural design of the
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unamely
art
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gallery
in two specific periods 2015 and present day.

Overall
, It is noticeable that there are four main aspects with regard to the
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changes
in the
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ground floor
,
namely
the exhibition room 4, the
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gallery
office, the relocation of the receptionist, the addition of recreational amenities.
Additionally
, A Nobel zone for kids has
been built
in order to serve customers better.

There have been
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some
complete alternatives along with the right-wall exhibition during the two mentioned periods. In 2005, there was a café in the corner of the gallery's right wall. In the currents scheme, there are
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some
additions to recreational amenities,
namely
the new
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gallery
shop and the adjacent vending machine.
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In
the present plan, the
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gallery
office and the existed exhibition room 4 locating in the right of the 2005 map have
been demolished
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whatwith
give rooms for constructing new inner facilities such as a children area and a
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tempolary
exhibition.

A more detailed look at the present map
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shows
that there has been a relocation of the receptionist from the middle to the top of the arcade compared to the past.
In addition
, customers
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used
to frequent upstairs on foot, which has been better convenience in this day and age inasmuch as
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intaking
a new elevator, putting the quality services on priority. Meanwhile, there have been no
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changes
in the
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left
-wall of the
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gallery
throughout the mentioned periods.
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IELTS academic The given maps demonstrate the modification in architectural design of the ground floor of an unamely art gallery in two specific periods 2015 and present day.

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