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The given map shows the proposed changes to cid buro college for its development into seed borough university

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The given map shows the proposed changes to cid buro college for its development into seed borough university in the map we can see that on the 8600 road the entrance or the main gate to the Sid borrow university is located upon entering through the main gate to the left is the residential accommodation and to the right is the main college building upon walking further on this path today right we can see the faculty offices can be side dim is the library or the Resource Center beside the residential complex we can see the building of the student union I’m walking further and passing through the the new footbridge on the left hand side we can see the hope river and just in front of it the Sports Complex alarm with the huge playing fields are present the whole paper cuts through the proposed plan and separates the residential complex and student union building from the other buildings on the university premises it also passes through the a 600 road in the given map we can see both the present college facilities and also the upcoming college facilities
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college for its development into seed borough university in the map we can
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that on the 8600 road the entrance or the main gate to the Sid borrow university
is located
upon entering
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through
the main gate to the
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left
is the residential accommodation and to the right is the main college
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building
upon walking
further
on this path
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today
right we can
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see
the faculty offices can be side dim is the library or the Resource Center beside the residential complex we can
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see
the
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building
of the student union I’m walking
further
and passing
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through
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the the
new footbridge on the
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left hand
side we can
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see
the hope river and
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just
in front of it the Sports Complex alarm with the huge playing fields are present the whole paper
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cuts
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through
the proposed plan and separates the residential complex and student union
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building
from the other
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buildings
on the university premises it
also
passes
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through
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the a
600 road in the
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given
map we can
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see
both the present college facilities and
also
the upcoming college facilities
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IELTS academic The given map shows the proposed changes to cid buro college for its development into seed borough university

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5.5
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