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Population distribution in the Northwest Region for 1900-2050

Population distribution in the Northwest Region for 1900-2050 JKaBe
The bar chart provides information about the percentages of the population distribution in the Northwest Region from 1900 to 2050. Overall, It can be seen that there was a changing disparity between 3 areas including rural, suburban, and urban. The change of the rural index and the suburban index follow a certain direction while the residents of the city fluctuate significantly over the given time. From 1900 to 2000, There was a dramatic decrease in the number of people who live in the countryside from around 65% to 20%. In addition, a considerable increase in city and suburban was seen, with the number of city people reaching a peak of 60% and the number of residents in the outback rising to 20%. By 2050, the proportion of population distribution is predicted to changing in three areas, most noticeably in the suburbs where the figure is expected to rise by around 55%. On the other hand, the figures for the number of people living in the city is expected to fall by 35% and 10% in the countryside.
The bar chart provides information about the percentages of the population distribution in the Northwest Region from 1900 to 2050.

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that there was a changing disparity between 3 areas including rural, suburban, and urban. The
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of the rural index and the suburban index follow a certain direction while the residents of the city fluctuate
significantly
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time.

From 1900 to 2000, There was a dramatic decrease in the
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people
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in the countryside from around 65% to 20%.
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, a considerable increase in city and suburban was
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seen
, with the
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of city
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reaching a peak of 60% and the
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of residents in the outback rising to 20%.

By 2050, the proportion of population distribution
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to changing in three areas, most
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in the suburbs where the figure is
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to rise by around 55%.
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living in the city is
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to fall by 35% and 10% in the countryside.
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