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THE given map illustrates the changes come in theatre facilities in 2012 as compared to 2010.

THE given map illustrates the changes come in theatre facilities in 2012 as compared to 2010. N37pW
The given process illustrates the information about changes came in theatre in 2012 as compared to 2010. Overview, the map represents the changes came in the theatre by introducing restaurant facility in 2012 that was not their in 2010 and some locations of places changed as compared to 2010. After having keen observation of the given data, it is vivid that, In 2010, in the left corner of the theatre Ticket office and admin office were situated and cafe was in the right corner next to cafe was storage place. The auditorium was situated in the center on the both sides sitting chair are installed for visitors and stage was in front and next to stage was dressing room. Whereas, In 2012, entering to main door in the left side restaurant replaced admin office and ticket office and ticket office was shifted in the place of cafe in the right side next to it was open empty place. While the auditorium was same as compared to 2010 but stage was big as compared to 2010 and next to stage was coordination space and in the right side of it dressing room and in the left side admin office was situated.
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theatre
in 2012 as compared to 2010. Overview, the map represents the
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changes
came in the
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theatre
by introducing restaurant facility in 2012 that was not their in 2010 and
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some
locations of
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places
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changed
as compared to 2010. After having keen observation of the
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given
data, it is vivid that, In 2010, in the
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left
corner of the
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theatre
Ticket
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office
and admin
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office
were situated
and
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cafe
was in the right corner
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next
to
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cafe
was storage
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place
. The auditorium
was situated
in the center on the both
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sides
sitting chair
are installed
for visitors and
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stage
was in front and
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next
to
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stage
was dressing room. Whereas, In 2012, entering to main door in the
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left
side restaurant replaced admin
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office
and ticket
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office
and ticket
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office
was shifted
in the
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place
of
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cafe
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in the right side
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next
to it was open empty
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place
. While the auditorium was same as compared to 2010
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stage
was
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big
as compared to 2010 and
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next
to
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stage
was coordination space and
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in the right side
of it dressing room and in the
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left
side admin
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office
was situated
.
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IELTS academic THE given map illustrates the changes come in theatre facilities in 2012 as compared to 2010.

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1 paragraphs
200 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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