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ASDHLSADH ALSDHKSALJIDKASDAS

ASDHLSADH ALSDHKSALJIDKASDAS N37Ab
The pie charts present the water usage percentage on different areas in six parts of the world. Overall, Water usage has the biggest portion, on industrial purpose in the western countries, North America and Europe while, it's the agricultural purpose in the rest areas which is South America, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia. Spent water amount for industrial use, at first place in North America and Europe, with 48% and 53% respectively, which is around the half of total. It's dramatically less than agricultural use in South East Asia, with 12%. In South America, Africa, Central Asia wasting water for industrial purposes have the least proportion of the total after agricultural and domestic, which is no more than 10%. Agricultural usage has the lion's share in South America, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia, with 71%, 84%, 88%, 81% respectively. It's second most water waster before the domestic usage in the western blocks, roughly one third in both.
The pie charts present the
water
usage
percentage on
different
areas in six parts of the world.
Overall
,
Water
usage
has the biggest portion, on industrial purpose in the western countries, North America and Europe while, it's the
agricultural
purpose in the rest areas which is South America, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia.

Spent
water
amount for industrial
use
, at
first
place in North America and Europe, with 48% and 53%
respectively
, which is around the half of total. It's
dramatically
less than
agricultural
use
in South East Asia, with 12%. In South America, Africa, Central Asia wasting
water
for industrial purposes have the least proportion of the total after
agricultural
and domestic, which is no more than
10%. Agricultural
usage
has the lion's share in South America, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia, with 71%, 84%, 88%, 81%
respectively
. It's second most
water
waster
before
the domestic
usage
in the western blocks, roughly one third in both.
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IELTS academic ASDHLSADH ALSDHKSALJIDKASDAS

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
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