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The given map depicts the changes undergone in the coastal city of westport with in a period of 20 years

The given map depicts the changes undergone in the coastal city of westport with in a period of 20 years allN7
The map illustrates the changes in coastal city of westport in 1995 to 2015Overall, it can be clearly seen that, the major changed had north eastern side it was minor roads improved and builted localhousing, airport, and three gated communities wayTo start with, in 1995 in northern side guest houses removed and builted luxury hotels and swimming pool and in north eastern side it was had minor roads renovated and builted local housing airport and three taxi gated communities. However, it was southern side local area in had houses and shop it had changed power station. Moreover, population was 1200 and it had been increase population 48000On the other hand, in western side had natural harbour and fishing boats are was changed ferry and others changed in western side fishing villages was builted swimming pool. Moreover, in north western side pibbel beaches was changed sandy breaches.
The map illustrates the
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changes
in coastal city of
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westport
in 1995 to 2015Overall, it can be
clearly
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seen
that, the major
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changed
had
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north eastern
side it was minor roads
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improved
and
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builted
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localhousing
, airport, and three gated communities
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wayTo
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start
with, in 1995 in northern side guest
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houses
removed and
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builted
luxury hotels and swimming pool and in
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north eastern
side it
was had
minor roads renovated and
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builted
local housing airport and three taxi gated communities.
However
, it was southern side local area in had
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houses
and shop it had
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changed
power station.
Moreover
, population was 1200 and it had been increase population 48000On the other hand, in western side had natural
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harbour
and fishing boats are
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was
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changed
ferry
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and others
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changed
in western side fishing villages was
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builted
swimming pool.
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Moreover
, in
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north western
side
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pibbel
beaches was
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changed
sandy breaches.
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IELTS academic The given map depicts the changes undergone in the coastal city of westport with in a period of 20 years

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