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Line chart below to unemployment in Japan and Us

Line chart below to unemployment in Japan and Us KllMN

This line chart depicts the figure of non-working people from United States and Japan from March 1993 to 1999. It is clear from the graph that rate in Us dropped to four percent, while Japan rocket up to four point seven percent. According to what is shown, the Us ratio in 1993 was peak but it is dipped in March 1995, the rate continues to fluctuate decreased until the percentage become 4% in ninteen ninty nine. In one hand, Japan proportions rocket up to 4. 7 per cent, before this rise it was a tiny percentage in 93. Over the year that number still fluctuate soar until nineteen ninety nine it is arrived to the highest proportion. To sum up, we could say that the ratio relationship between the two states is inverse, when the number of unemployment in Us dropped, the figure in Japan is climp, until the year before 99 the difference is diminutive.

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Japan
 from March 1993 to 1999. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the graph that rate in Us dropped to four percent, while You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 rocket up to four point seven percent.

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the Us
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 in March 1995, the rate continues to fluctuate decreased until the percentage become 4% in Possible spelling mistake found.nineteen
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Japan
 proportions rocket up to 4. 7 per cent, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
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 this rise it was a tiny percentage in 93. Over the year that number still
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 it is arrived
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Japan
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, until the year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
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 99 the difference is diminutive. 