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The chart below shows the number of passengers who used public transport in Somewhere town from 2012 to 2015.

The chart below shows the number of passengers who used public transport in Somewhere town from 2012 to 2015. eey57
The bar chart illustrates the number of commuters travelling by three different public transport in Somewhere town between 2012 and 2015. Overall, public transport users fluctuated over the course of 3 years. In particular, figures for people commuting by tram experienced the biggest growth while the number of train passengers witnessed violent volatility. In 2012, individuals who travel by train recorded the highest out of those means of public transport, at over 80000 passengers, compared to around 55000 bus passengers, and 20000 passengers using trams. However, the figure for bus users was the highest although it fell by 15000 people in 2013, while the opposite was true for the number of commuters using train, at 10000 passengers. These level still remain till 2015 when train users spiked by 30000 people since 2014. Simmilarly, train passengers had a rise of nearly 28000 commuters but the number of bus travellers slightly decrease, at 60000 users at the end of the period.
The bar chart illustrates the
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public transport in Somewhere town between 2012 and 2015.

Overall
, public transport
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users
fluctuated over the course of 3 years.
In particular
, figures for
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people
commuting by tram experienced the biggest growth while the
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of
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train
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passengers
witnessed violent volatility.

In 2012, individuals who travel by
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recorded the highest out of those means of public transport, at over 80000
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passengers
, compared to around 55000 bus
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passengers
, and 20000
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passengers
using trams.
However
, the figure for bus
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users
was the highest although it fell by 15000
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people
in 2013, while the opposite was true for the
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of commuters using
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, at 10000 passengers.

These level
still
remain till 2015 when
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train
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users
spiked by 30000
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people
since 2014.
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Simmilarly
,
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train
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had a rise of
nearly
28000 commuters
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of bus
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travellers
slightly
decrease, at 60000
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of passengers who used public transport in Somewhere town from 2012 to 2015.

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