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Happy Valley Shopping Centre

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The given map charts demonstrate information about the infrastructure of happy Valley Shopping Center in the selected two years 1982 and 2012. Having a glass, a plethora of improvement were there in a shopping centre by planners, only entertainment area and toilet room were not removed in the two different years. Turning to detail, there was a lake in 1983 which was demolished and moved into furniture retail in the year of 2012, although a parking lot was opened for a public in the Southwest -side in 2012. since 1982, there was a lobby near the entrance gate and it was knocked down by the head of shopping centre in 2012. The entertainment area and toilet place were remained in the given period. Moving towards the rest of description, in 1982 a coffee shop and food store was replaced into Sports store and electronic store in the north-direction, as a sport Store, Electronic store and furniture area which was converted in the themend restaurants in the right- hand side and a food store was the built in 2012 at the same side.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map charts demonstrate information about the infrastructure of happy Valley Shopping Center in the selected two years 1982 and 2012. Having a glass, a plethora of improvement were there in a shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 by planners, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 entertainment area and This expression can be considered mildly offensive (especially in Canadian and American English).restroomwashroombathroompowder room
toilet room
 were not removed in the two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 years. Turning to detail, there was a lake in 1983 which was demolished
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 into furniture retail in the year of 2012, although a parking lot was opened
 for a public in the Southwest -side in 2012. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSince
since
 1982, there was a lobby near the entrance gate and it was knocked
 down by the head of shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 in 2012. The entertainment area and toilet place were remained
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period. Moving towards the rest of description, in 1982 a coffee shop and food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
was replaced
 into Sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 and electronic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 in the north-direction, as a sport You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
Store
, Electronic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 and furniture area which was converted
 in the Possible spelling mistake found.themedthe mendthem end
themend
 restaurants in the right- hand side and a food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 was the A hyphen is missing in the adjective "built-in".built-in
built in
 2012 at the same side. 