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The given line graphs illustrate the data regarding the percentage of electric appliances altered and the amount of time spent doing chores every week between 1920 and 2019.

The given line graphs illustrate the data regarding the percentage of electric appliances altered and the amount of time spent doing chores every week between 1920 and 2019. 2rw1x
The given line graphs illustrate the data regarding the percentage of electric appliances altered and the amount of time spent doing chores every week between 1920 and 2019. Overall, it can be seen that electrical appliances grew sharply except washing machine while the total time spent on household per week decreased. The trend for refrigerator showed the starting at 0 points while vacuum cleaner was 40% in 1920. The proportion of those ownerships who used refrigerator and vacuum cleaner increased by 45 % and 40% respectively from 1940 to 1980 and then both figures saw a leveling out last about 2 decades. Hence, Having risen gradually to less than a third for four decades, the washing machine a minimal decline in 1980 then grows up. Furthermore, it reached a peak at 70% in 2019
The
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line graphs illustrate the data regarding the percentage of electric appliances altered and the amount of time spent doing chores every week between 1920 and 2019.

Overall
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that electrical appliances grew
sharply
except washing machine while the total time spent on household per week decreased.

The trend for refrigerator
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showed
the starting at 0 points while vacuum cleaner was 40% in 1920. The proportion of those
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ownerships
who
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used
refrigerator and vacuum cleaner increased by 45 % and 40%
respectively
from 1940 to 1980 and then both figures
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saw
a leveling out last about 2 decades.
Hence
, Having risen
gradually
to less than a third for four decades, the washing machine a minimal decline in 1980 then grows up.
Furthermore
, it reached a peak at 70% in 2019

IELTS academic The given line graphs illustrate the data regarding the percentage of electric appliances altered and the amount of time spent doing chores every week between 1920 and 2019.

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