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The given line graph illustrates how many enquiries were received by The Tourist Information Office in one city

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The given line graph illustrates how many enquiries were received by The Tourist Information Office in one city over the course of 6 months in 2011, according to three different manners. In general, the number of enquiries received by letter or email experienced a slight decreasew, while a subtantial rise of enquiries was recorded in the site and via telephone. As presented in the chart, starting at just over 400 units in January, the amount of off-site enquiries witnessed a significant increase to 1900 units in Jun. Despite a higher starting point, with 900 enquiries which doubled the number of enquiries received in person, the volume of telephone ones had undertaken the offline cases, with only 1600 enquiries in June. In contrast, In January, the figure for enquiries by letter or email stood at nearly 800, and then a marginal drop of 200 units was observed in the next six months.
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were received
by The Tourist Information Office in one city over the course of 6 months in 2011, according to three
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different
manners.

In general
, the number of
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enquiries
received by letter or email experienced a slight
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decreasew
, while a
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subtantial
rise of
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.
enquiries
was recorded
in the site and via telephone.

As presented in the chart, starting at
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just
over 400 units in January, the amount of off-site
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.
enquiries
witnessed a significant increase to 1900 units in Jun. Despite a higher starting point, with 900
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.
enquiries
which doubled the number of
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiries' is British English.
enquiries
received in person, the volume of telephone ones had undertaken the offline cases, with
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only
1600
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enquiries
in June.

In contrast
, In January, the figure for
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enquiries
by letter or email stood at
nearly
800, and then a marginal drop of 200 units
was observed
in the
next
six months.
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