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The given line graph compare three companies waste which they produced between the years 2000and2015 duration.

The given line graph compare three companies waste which they produced between the years 2000and2015 duration. WmPme
The given line graph compare three companies waste which they produced between the years 2000and2015 duration. Overall it can be seen all three companies changed considerably, all quantity of rubbish produces preformed about 95 tonnas a duration of 15 years. In the fallowing years despite both A and B companies ratio decreased steadly but they manufactured more rubbish than company C. According to the picture, the best prodused company was A given in a blue line which produced about 12 tonnas waste in 2000, but this ratio decreased dramatically other years. Second higer tendency belonged to another company B which given in a green line and it manufactured just about more mere 9tonnas rubbish in 2000 years but this ratio went up moderatly in 2006 and went down sharply over the 10years. The lowest tendency belonged to next company C which given orange line made up about 4 tonnas litter in the 2000s but this ratio rose gradually by the 2005 year this fescue equaled 6 tonnas and around 9 tonnas in 2015. In total C and B companies output the truck about 27 and 28tonnas trash simultaneously along with this tendency of Company A amounted to around 40tonnas In 15years
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graph compare three
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waste which they produced between the years 2000and2015 duration.

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all three
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, all quantity of rubbish produces preformed about 95
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a duration of 15 years. In the fallowing years despite both A and B
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decreased
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they manufactured more rubbish than
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C.

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was A
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which produced about 12
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waste in 2000,
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this
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decreased
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other years. Second
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tendency belonged to another
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B which
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and it manufactured
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about more mere 9tonnas rubbish in 2000 years
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went up
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moderatly
in 2006 and went down
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next
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C which
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orange
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made up about 4
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litter in the 2000s
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rose
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equaled 6
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in 2015.

In total C and B
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output the truck about 27 and 28tonnas trash
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A amounted to around 40tonnas In 15years
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IELTS academic The given line graph compare three companies waste which they produced between the years 2000and2015 duration.

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