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The diagram illustrates the way in which ketchup product are produced and delivered to markets in process.

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The diagram illustrates the way in which ketchup product are produced and delivered to markets in process. There are 15stages of to make ketchup product. The first stage, ripe tomatoes are harvested and put in baskets by workers then they are sorted good and bad tomatoes. Good tomatoes are transported to the machine by a track. At the factory tomatoes are seperated from their seeds and outer skins before poured into the pot. The next stage, tomatoes are crushed in the pot and should be/ought to closed with lid to make liquid. After have spiceilized with sugar, salt and vinegar, it was boilt two hours in respective temprature. Then ready product are poured into bottles which are then lebeled. Before being packed into boxes, the botlles are checked quality. The final stage is distrubution where it reaches supermarkets and other outlets and you buy a botlle of ketchup then enjoy with delicious meals.
The diagram illustrates the way in which ketchup product
are produced
and delivered to markets in process. There are
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15stages
of to
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make
ketchup product. The
first
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stage
, ripe tomatoes
are harvested
and put in baskets by workers then they
are sorted
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good
and
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bad
tomatoes.
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Good
tomatoes
are transported
to the machine by a
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track
. At the factory tomatoes are
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seperated
from their seeds and outer skins
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before
poured into the pot. The
next
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stage
, tomatoes
are crushed
in the pot and should be/ought to closed with lid to
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make
liquid. After have
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spiceilized
with sugar, salt and vinegar, it was
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boilt
two hours in respective
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temprature
. Then ready product
are poured
into bottles which are then
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lebeled
.
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Before
being packed
into boxes, the
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botlles
are
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checked
quality. The final
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stage
is
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distrubution
where it reaches supermarkets and other outlets and you
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buy
a
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botlle
of ketchup then enjoy with delicious meals.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the way in which ketchup product are produced and delivered to markets in process.

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