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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. m11D1
The chart indicates the gross figures for minutes (in billions) of cell calls throughout the UK, divided into three items between 1995 and 2002. Overall, when we take a look at the chart, we can easily see that the amount of categories have changed over the years. They have a number of fluctuations as well. Primarily, although the local-fixed line have ups and downs, it was on the top of the chart by years. The figures for this item were between 72 and 90 billion minutes from 1995 to 1999 respectively. After that, unfortunately the amount has decreased whereas others have increased. Firstly, almost to 84 and the following years about 79 and 63 billion minutes. On the other hand, National and International-fixed line and Mobiles (all calls) have increased during the years. The amount for the former type of calls were 37 billion, while the other was 5 billion minutes. The next years both of the ites have made significant differences. Firstly National and International-fixed line's figures were uo to almost 42 and 55 between 1996 and 2000 and Mobiles (all calls) amounts have also raised around to 7 and 23 billion within the years. The next years, the number for the former category were exactly 60 and about 72 billion minutes. The latter category were approxinately 39 and 47 billion minutes from 2001 and 2002.
The chart indicates the gross figures for minutes (in
billions)
of cell
calls
throughout the UK, divided into three items between 1995 and 2002.

Overall
, when we take a look at the chart, we can
easily
see
that the
amount
of categories
have
changed
over the years. They have a number of fluctuations
as well
.

Primarily
, although the local-
fixed
line have ups and downs, it was on the top of the chart by years. The figures for this item were between 72 and 90
billion
minutes from 1995 to 1999
respectively
. After that, unfortunately the
amount
has decreased whereas others have increased.
Firstly
, almost to 84 and the following years about 79 and 63
billion
minutes.
On the other hand
, National and International-
fixed
line and Mobiles (all
calls)
have increased during the years. The
amount
for the former type of
calls
were 37
billion
, while the other was 5
billion
minutes. The
next
years both of the
ites
have made significant differences.
Firstly
National and International-
fixed
line's figures were
uo
to almost 42 and 55 between 1996 and 2000 and Mobiles (all
calls)
amounts
have
also
raised around to 7 and 23
billion
within the years. The
next
years, the number for the former category were exactly 60 and about 72
billion
minutes. The latter category were
approxinately
39 and 47
billion
minutes
from 2001 and 2002
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

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