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The given line chart gives information about the percentage of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in the USA, Sweden and Japan.

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The given line chart gives information about the percentage of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in the USA, Sweden and Japan. Overall, it is obvious that the proportion off people who are older than 64 years in the USA and Sweden experiences a sharp rise during the period in question, while that of the population aged 65 and over in Japan had a slight decrease before a precipitous rise in the rate of elderly people in that country. In the year 1940, the percentage of senior citizens in the USA was greatest, at about 10%. This was followed by the figure of the population aged 65 and over (around 7%) in Sweden. The proportion of aging population who were over 64 years old in Japan was smallest, just 5%. The rate of older people in The USA and Sweden experienced moderate increase during the period from 1940 to 1980, with the former rising sharply to 15% in 1980 and the latter going up moderately to below 15% at the same time, but then these rate has a slight reversal to 14% and 13% in two countries respectively. In the period in shown time saw a slow reduction to 3% in the percentage of the average old population in Japan. There was a steadily upward trend in the proportion of the senior citizens in the Japan to approximately 10% in 2020. The figure of the people who are older than 64 years in the USA and Sweden continued to grow moderately to 17% and above 15% respectively. After 2020, the percentage of aged people shots up significantly. Furthermore, it is predicted that in 2040 this rate will reach a peak of nearly four times higher than 1940, to above 25%. It is forecast that there will be steadily increase in the proportion of population aged 65 and over in the USA and Sweden in 2040 to between 20% and 25% and smaller than that of Japan

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