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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 5m2A
The given bar graph provides us the information of the oil production capacity of 6 countries in the year 1990, 2000, 2005 and 2010. Saudi Arabia has been the leading producer of oil among all the other countries throughout the given years. In 1990 it had a production capacity of producing 8 million barrels per day which raised up to 14 million barrels per day. Iran holds the second place as in 1990 it had a capacity of manufacturing 3 million barrels that increased to 4. 2 million in 2010. Countries like Iraq, Kuwait and UAE were seen at an indistinguishable rate of production in 1990 that is around 1. 5-2. 2 m barrels per day and had a similar rate of increase among them in 2010 which is between 3. 5-4 m barrels per day. Qatar has been the least oil producing country among all, it had a production rate of 0. 5 m in 1990 which did fluctuated among all these years but was stuck back at 0. 5 m in 2010.
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bar graph provides us the information of the oil
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production
capacity of 6
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countries
in the year 1990, 2000, 2005 and 2010.

Saudi Arabia has been the leading producer of oil among all the other
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countries
throughout the
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years. In
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had a
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production
capacity of producing 8
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million
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barrels
per day which raised up to 14
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million
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barrels
per day. Iran holds the second place as in 1990 it had a capacity of manufacturing 3
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million
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barrels
that increased to 4. 2
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million
in
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2010. Countries
like Iraq, Kuwait and UAE were
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seen
at an indistinguishable rate of
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production
in 1990
that is
around 1. 5-2. 2 m
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barrels
per day and had a similar rate of increase among them in 2010 which is between 3. 5-4 m
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barrels
per day. Qatar has been the least oil producing
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country
among all, it had a
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production
rate of 0. 5 m in 1990 which did fluctuated among all these years
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was stuck
back at 0. 5 m in 2010.
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IELTS academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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174 words
6.5
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