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The given graph shows the data about the number of people that use London Underground Station in different times on a usual day.

The given graph shows the data about the number of people that use London Underground Station in different times on a usual day. e5aYO
The given graph shows the data about the number of people that use London Underground Station in different times on a usual day. Overall, it can be seen that the number of passenger that ride the train rose up over the given period. At 6am, the station has 100 passengers and it rises to 400 passengers from 6am to 8am and that is the peak point of the whole graph. However, the graph experiences a dramatic fall between 8am and 10am with nearly 200 riders. Then, the number of passengers rises gradually from 10am to 14pm with about 300 people that use the train. After that, the level of graph decreases noticeably till 16 pm with about 100 passengers. 16pm saw a considerable raise in the level of riders until 18pm with nearly 380. Then, the level of passengers descends rapidly from 18pm to 20 pm with about 110 people. Afterwards, the graph fluctuates a little bit till 22pm with nearly 150 passengers that use London Underground Station
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the data about the number of
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use
London Underground Station in
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different
times on a usual day.
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, it can be
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seen
that the number of
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passenger
that ride the train rose up over the
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period.

At 6am, the station has 100
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passengers
and it rises to 400
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passengers
from 6am to 8am and
that is
the peak point of the whole
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graph
.
However
, the
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graph
experiences a dramatic fall between 8am and 10am with
nearly
200 riders. Then, the number of
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passengers
rises
gradually
from 10am to 14pm with about 300
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people
that
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use
the train. After that, the level of
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graph
decreases
noticeably
till 16 pm with about 100 passengers.

16pm
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saw
a considerable raise in the level of riders until 18pm with
nearly
380. Then, the level of
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passengers
descends
rapidly
from 18pm to 20 pm with about 110
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people
. Afterwards, the
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graph
fluctuates a
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little bit
till 22pm with
nearly
150
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passengers
that
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use
London Underground Station
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IELTS academic The given graph shows the data about the number of people that use London Underground Station in different times on a usual day.

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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