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The given graph below shows the coronavirus infected number in total in different five countries USA,Germany, UK,France, Italy and Spain in the terms of April to July in the year of 2020.

The given graph below shows the coronavirus infected number in total in different five countries USA, Germany, UK, France, Italy and Spain in the terms of April to July in the year of 2020. b1d6

The given column graph compares the deadliest coronavirus infected in total in specific countries during the month of March to July in the year of 2020. It can be clearly seen that among these country, the USA represents as the highest infected coronavirus cases in total number in each month where the maximum cases was 78, 000 in July as well as 52, 000 in April. It is noticeable that both the UK and Spain had the similar total cases in the whole period. In the UK, the upper cases was in all almost 15, 000 while Spain was standing at about 13, 500 and both contributed as minimum around 7, 800 for the UK and 7, 160 case for the Spain. After the USA, France stood at around 50, 000 as highest which was little bit lower than the USA. Both Germany and Italy carried slightly similar infected number, which was around 22, 000 in Germany and 24, 000 in Italy as highest cases where 10, 000 and 14, 000 was the lower cases quantity. We can see from this chart, July was the maximum infected cases month for every single month except France. Overall, The USA was the most virus infected country as well as France grabbed the second position in total count where Germany and Italy had the similar number of infected cases. Nevertheless the UK and Spain maintained their position as similarly in total number count.

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