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The following two pictures show the changes of buildings in Liverton Docks between 1980 and present.

The following two pictures show the changes of buildings in Liverton Docks between 1980 and present. N30Ry
The given map illustrates the information about the structural development and transformation of Livertonone Dock between 1980 and the present. Overall, it can be seen that new facilities have been added in the Livertone Dock and more planned and well organised. In detail, in 1980, there were 2 warehouse and 1 crane situated in the north of the Liverton Dock but now it is replaced by two Education Centre, a sailing club, and a kid's playing area. After that there were four ships in the river in 1980 now it is replaced by ship Museum, bridge and flood barrier. The riverwalk had been added in the west side of present layout while the crane was removed in the West South of Liver Dock in 1980. Turning attention towards the remaining point of the layout, the warehouse was removed in the south side below the Liverton Dock in 1918 But, presently it is converted into a hotel, 2 apartments, and parking. The direction of N in the west side of the layout same in the both map. New building and converted building had been added in the east-south side of the liverton dock.
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Livertonone
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Dock
between 1980 and the present.
Overall
, it can be
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that new facilities have been
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added
in the
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Livertone
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Dock
and more planned and
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well organised
. In detail, in 1980, there were 2
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warehouse
and 1 crane situated in the north of the
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Liverton
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but
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now
it
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, a sailing club, and a kid's playing area. After that there were four ships in the river in 1980
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now
it
is replaced
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riverwalk
had been
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added
in the west side of present layout while the crane
was removed
in the West South of Liver
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Dock
in 1980. Turning attention towards the remaining point of the layout, the warehouse
was removed
in the south side below the
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Liverton
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Dock
in 1918
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,
presently
it
is converted
into a hotel, 2 apartments, and parking. The direction of N in the west side of the layout same in the both map. New building and converted building had been
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added
in the east-south side of the
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liverton
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dock
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IELTS academic The following two pictures show the changes of buildings in Liverton Docks between 1980 and present.

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