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The given diagram shows the stages of simple cooking equipment

The given diagram shows the stages of simple cooking equipment kWx0O

The given picture represents the steps of development of simple cooking items. In an overview, it is observed that there are many development occurs in cooking equipment but clay plays a major role in every equipment. It crystal clear that inthe stage a the cooking equipment is look like a pot and it stand on the stones. Aditional in stage b, it changed completely and it made by the help of clay shield in utter surface. Moving further, onstage c, simple cooking equipment change in morden equipment but, clay is used to form lining and there is a handle by which it is easy to carry and it made up of metal and in upper part there are some grate that' is for charcoal and there are some support that support the pot. In downward there is the a small door that helps for removal of ash and air

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 picture represents the steps of development of simple cooking items. In an overview, it is observed
 that there are Possible agreement error. The noun development seems to be countable; consider using: "many developments".many developments
many development
 occurs in cooking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 clay plays a major role in every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
. It seems that a verb is missing after "It". Please verify.It isIt was
It
 crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that Possible spelling mistake found.in theint he
inthe
 stage Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "a" or "the" is left.athe
a the
 cooking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
 is look like a pot and it Did you mean "stands"?stands
stand
 on the stones. Possible spelling mistake found.Additional
Aditional
 in stage b, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 completely and it made by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of clay shield in utter surface. Moving further
, onstage c, simple cooking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in Possible spelling mistake found.BordenMorten
morden
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, clay is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to form lining and there is a handle by which it is easy to carry and it made up of metal and in upper part there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "grates"?grates
grate
 that' is for charcoal and there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 support that support the pot. In downward there is Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "a" is left.thea
the a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 door that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 for removal of ash and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphair.air!air?air:air,air;
air