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The bar graph below shows change in the four modes of transport: bus, car, bike and foot between the years 1950 and 1990.

The bar graph below shows change in the four modes of transport: bus, car, bike and foot between the years 1950 and 1990. NllPg
Some interesting statistics concerning the proportion of people moving in four means of transport in a particular city in Europe between 1950 and 1990 are vividly depicted in the given bar chart. In a general perspective, it is clear that the tally of people transported by car increased noticeably while other 3 kinds of transport displayed a downward trend. The initial impression from the chart is that the tally of people transport by car witnessed a remarkable change, its figure was the last on the list, with only 5% then the proportion of people using car represented a large majority of the mean of transport in 1990, with 35%, making it twice times as popular as the bus.
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interesting statistics concerning the proportion of
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people
moving in four means of
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transport
in a particular city in Europe between 1950 and 1990 are
vividly
depicted in the
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bar chart.
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, it is
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clear
that the tally of
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people
transported by car increased
noticeably
while other 3 kinds of
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transport
displayed a downward trend.

The initial impression from the chart is that the tally of
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people
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transport
by car witnessed a remarkable
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change
, its figure was the last on the list, with
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only
5% then the proportion of
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people
using car represented a large majority of the mean of
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transport
in 1990, with 35%, making it twice times as popular as the bus.
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IELTS academic The bar graph below shows change in the four modes of transport: bus, car, bike and foot between the years 1950 and 1990.

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