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The bar chart illustrates the rising of GDP every 12 months for three nations during the period of three-year.

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The bar chart illustrates the rising of GDP every 12 months for three nations during the period of three-year. Overall, there were different trends in the GDP growth for Tunisia, Japan, Ecuador from 2007 to 2010. In 2007, Tunisia's GDP was the highest figure in the group of three countries with 6%, which was almost twice as many as the percentage of Ecuador'. At this time, Japan has the lowest proportion of GDP with 2%. There were significant rises in the GDP of Japan and Ecuador in 2008, which was double from the 2007s' figure, 4% and 5%, respectively. In contrast, the proportion of Tunisia increased slightly by about 2%. Within two years from 2008 to 2010, Tunisia's GDP decreased gradually by about 1% while Japan reached a peak of 6. 5%, and it was the same as Tunisia's figure in 2007. However, there was a fluctuation in the Ecuadors' GDP, it fell dramatically to about 4% in 2009, and then, this number was rose by 1% in the year 2010. It can be noted that, although Tunisia's figure was the highest in 2007, it fell to 3% in the period of three years, which was half the proportion of the original year. On the other hand, Japan's GDP was the lowest percentage of the three nations group, but it rose sharply within two years from 2008 to 2010, with double figures compared to 2007.
The bar chart illustrates the rising of GDP every 12 months for three nations during the period of three-year.

Overall
, there were
different
trends in the GDP growth for Tunisia,
Japan
, Ecuador from 2007 to 2010. In 2007, Tunisia's GDP was the highest
figure
in the group of three countries with 6%, which was almost twice as
many
as the percentage of Ecuador'. At this time,
Japan
has the lowest proportion of GDP with 2%. There were significant rises in the GDP of
Japan
and Ecuador in 2008, which was double from the 2007s'
figure
, 4% and 5%,
respectively
.
In contrast
, the proportion of Tunisia increased
slightly
by about 2%. Within two years from 2008 to 2010, Tunisia's GDP decreased
gradually
by about 1% while
Japan
reached a peak of 6. 5%, and it was the same as Tunisia's
figure
in 2007.
However
, there was a fluctuation in the
Ecuadors
' GDP, it fell
dramatically
to about 4% in 2009, and then, this number was rose by 1% in the
year
2010.

It can
be noted
that, although Tunisia's
figure
was the highest in 2007, it fell to 3% in the period of three years, which was half the proportion of the original
year
.
On the other hand
, Japan's GDP was the lowest percentage of the three nations group,
but
it rose
sharply
within two years from 2008 to 2010, with double
figures
compared to 2007.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the rising of GDP every 12 months for three nations during the period of three-year.

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