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The given diagram shows the process of recycling used aluminium cans. Overall, it is clear that six main steps are shown, which starts at collecting used cans and ends at reusing as drink cans.

The given diagram shows the process of recycling used aluminium cans. Overall, it is clear that six main steps are shown, which starts at collecting used cans and ends at reusing as drink cans. GLNEw
The given diagram shows the process of recycling used aluminium cans. Overall, it is clear that six main steps are shown, which starts at collecting used cans and ends at reusing as drink cans. In the initial step of the process, used cans are thrown into metal recycling bins and then collected by a specialised truck. Thereafter, they are transferred to a recycling plant and are cleaned, sorted to remove all things are not aluminium. After that, aluminium cans are shredded and put into a massive hydraulic press to compress so as to prepare for the following steps. Being heated subsequently at an appropriate temperature in a furnace, the pieces of cans are melted to form a liquid. Before turning back to the initial can’s shape, the aluminium liquid from the previous step is rolled to be from 2. 5 mm to 6 mm in thickness. Finally, recycled cans are ready to use for storing drinks, which accounts for approximately 74% in the UK.
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the process of recycling
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aluminium
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cans
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clear
that six main
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steps
are shown
, which
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starts
at collecting
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cans
and ends at reusing as drink cans.

In the initial
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step
of the process,
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used
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cans
are thrown
into metal recycling bins and then collected by a
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specialised
truck. Thereafter, they
are transferred
to a recycling plant and
are cleaned
, sorted to remove all things are not
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aluminium
. After that,
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aluminium
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cans
are shredded
and put into a massive hydraulic press to compress
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prepare for the following
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steps
.
Being heated
subsequently
at an appropriate temperature in a furnace, the pieces of
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cans
are melted
to form a liquid.
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Before
turning back to the initial
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can’s
shape, the
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aluminium
liquid from the previous
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step
is rolled
to be from 2. 5 mm to 6 mm in thickness.
Finally
, recycled
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cans
are ready to
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use
for storing drinks, which accounts for approximately 74% in the UK.
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IELTS academic The given diagram shows the process of recycling used aluminium cans. Overall, it is clear that six main steps are shown, which starts at collecting used cans and ends at reusing as drink cans.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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