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The table given illustrates how many vehicles of five kinds were registered in three separate years 2010,2012 and 2014.

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The table given illustrates how many vehicles of five kinds were registered in three separate years 2010, 2012 and 2014. Overall, the number of vehicles of 5 types saw an upward trend. Another key feature is that passenger vehicles recorded the highest figure in all three years, but motorcycles saw the most dramatic growth. Initially, 11. 8 million passenger vehicles were registered. This figure increased significantly to exactly 13 million until 2014, rising 10. 2%. Similarly, an upward trend was seen in the number of commercial vehicles, which rose by 17. 4% from 2. 3 million to 2. 7 million in 2014. At the beginning of the period, an increase was seen in the figure for motorcycles, which grew gradually from 540 thousand to 709 thousand, a rise of 30. 8%. The proportion of heavy struck and light struck registered also rose by 8. 3 % and 23. 5 %.

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 of five kinds were registered
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 an upward trend. Another key feature is that passenger You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
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 the most dramatic growth.

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 passenger You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
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were registered
. This figure increased significantly
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 until 2014, rising 10. 2%. Similarly
, an upward trend was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the number of commercial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvancarbustruckautomobile
vehicles
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 in 2014.

At the beginning of the period, an increase was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the figure for motorcycles, which grew gradually
 from 540 thousand to 709 thousand, a rise of 30. 8%. The proportion of heavy struck and light struck registered also
 rose by 8. 3 % and 23. 5 %. 