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The given diagram illustrates the recycling of aluminum beverage cans.

The given diagram illustrates the recycling of aluminum beverage cans. D2GM6
The given diagram illustrates the recycling of aluminum beverage cans. Overall, looking at the diagram, there are 6 main steps in recycling aluminum beverage bottles, starting with the sale of the product at the beverage vending machine and ending with the display of the product at the beverage machine. In the initial stage, products are displayed at drink machines, which are purchased and used by consumers. After use, consumers throw away recycled aluminium cans. Recycled aluminum cans are gathered in one place and classified either old aluminium or stool. The aluminum cans are then sent to a recycling center where they are pressed into blocks and prepared for the following. In the following stage, the aluminum blocks are delivered into recycling plant. In the aluminum recycling plant, the aluminium blocks are melt down become liquid aluminium which is then poured into the mold to create new aluminium bars before being forced into rolls in the next step. the final stage in factory, the new cans are made up of aluminium rolls. The entire aluminium recycling process concludess after the new cans are transported to drink machine for safe to customers.
The
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given
diagram illustrates the
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recycling
of
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aluminum
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beverage
cans.

Overall
, looking at the diagram, there are 6 main steps in
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recycling
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aluminum
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beverage
bottles, starting with the sale of the product at the
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beverage
vending machine and ending with the display of the product at the
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beverage
machine.

In the initial stage, products
are displayed
at drink machines, which are
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purchased
and
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used
by consumers. After
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use
, consumers throw away recycled
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aluminium
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cans
. Recycled
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aluminum
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cans
are gathered
in one place and classified either
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old
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aluminium
or stool. The
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aluminum
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cans
are then
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sent
to a
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recycling
center where they
are pressed
into blocks and prepared for the following.

In the following stage, the
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aluminum
blocks
are delivered
into
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recycling
plant. In the
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aluminum
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recycling
plant,
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the


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aluminium
blocks are melt down become liquid
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aluminium
which is then poured into the mold to create new
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aluminium
bars
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before
being forced
into rolls in the
next
step.
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the
final stage in factory, the new
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cans
are made
up of
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aluminium
rolls. The entire
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aluminium
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recycling
process
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concludess
after the new
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cans
are transported
to drink machine for safe to customers.
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