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the given diagram illustrates the life of silkworm

the given diagram illustrates the life of silkworm 0a179

The given pictorial show the life cycle of the silkworm and also shows the processes of silk cloth productions. The life cycle of a silkworm begins from the eggs laid by the mother worm and from these eggs the silkworm larvae are generated after 10 days. The silkworm larva usually eats leaves like mulberry leaves and completes the second stage of the life cycle in 4-6 weeks. In their third stage, they create silk thread shells and remain there for another 3 to 8 days and then create an oval cocoon. The cocoon stage lasts for around 16 days and they become moth in the final stage. With time the moths become grown-up and recycle the processes again. The second picture describes the processes of the silk cloth production which have more than 5 stages. In the initial stage, the silk thread shells of the silkworm are selected and then boiled in the next stage. After boiling in water the threads are unwinded and they are usually 300 to 900 meter long. Then these are twisted and dyed and finally, those are weaved to silks. The twisting, dying, weaving and then dying again the process is done more than once as per necessary to produce fine quality silks.

The

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given

pictorial

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show

the life cycle of the silkworm and

also

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shows

the

processes

of

silk

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cloth
 productions.

The life cycle of a silkworm

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begins

from the eggs laid by the mother worm and from these eggs the silkworm larvae

are generated

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after
 10 days.

The

silkworm larva

usually

eats

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leaves

like mulberry

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leaves

and completes the second

stage

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of
 the life cycle in 4-6 weeks. In their Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthird.third!third?third:third,third;
third

stage, they create

silk

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thread
 shells and remain there for another 3 to 8 days and then create an oval cocoon. The Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphcocoon.cocoon!cocoon?cocoon:cocoon,cocoon;
cocoon

stage

lasts for around 16

days and

they become moth in the final

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stage
. With time the moths become grown-up and recycle Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthe.the!the?the:the,the;
the

processes

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again
.

The second picture

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describes

the

processes

of the

silk

cloth production which have more than 5

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stages
. In the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphinitial.initial!initial?initial:initial,initial;
initial

stage, the

silk

thread shells of the silkworm

are selected

and then boiled in the

next

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stage
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 boiling in water the threads Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphare.are!are?are:are,are;
are

Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "unwound", the past tense form of the verb 'unwind'?unwound
unwinded
 and

they are

usually

300 to 900

meter

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long
. Then Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthese.these!these?these:these,these;
these

are twisted

and dyed and

finally
, those are

weaved

to

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSilks
silks
. The twisting, dying, weaving and then dying again Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthe.the!the?the:the,the;
the

process

is done

more than once as per necessary to produce fine quality

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSilks
silks
.