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Summarise the two map of a city before and after development.

Summarise the two map of a city before and after development. X7VRE
The two maps illustrate significant changes in a city, over a seventy one-year period, from 1950 to now. Overall, the city has developed substantially from a restricted area to a permanent town over the seventy one-year period through transforming a river into a lake in the middle of the city. Obviously, infrastructure and amenities have increased, along with the city's capacity to provide for citizens. As the first plan reveals, in 1950, the region was relatively tiny. There were main roads in all directions. The dwelling houses were to the north with 20. 000 populations. The southern area was filled with government buildings, an airport in the easterly corner, and the river from the west to the east. A business district was situated near the city centre. In contrast, the town has preserved the bridge over the new lake. At the present, the town has grown dramatically by 2021, containing all of the new facilities. More houses have been built on all sides with 200. 000 populations, and new infrastructure added in the southern part of the city. The narrow river running through the city has been dammed to create the large lake that stretches for miles along the southern edge of the residential area. Similarly, they have strategically extended the business region greatly to the south side and includes on both sides of the lake. It seems that another structure on the lake has been constructed fairly close to a newly built dam to the east. According to the plan, the airport has been more than doubled in size.
The two maps illustrate significant
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changes
in a city, over a seventy one-year period, from 1950 to
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now
.

Overall
, the city has developed
substantially
from a restricted area to a permanent town over the seventy one-year period through transforming a river into a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lake
in the middle of the city.
Obviously
, infrastructure and amenities have increased, along with the city's capacity to provide for citizens.

As the
first
plan reveals, in 1950, the region was
relatively
tiny. There were main roads in all directions. The dwelling
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
were to the north with 20. 000 populations. The southern area
was filled
with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
buildings, an airport in the
easterly
corner, and the river from the west to the east. A business district
was situated
near the city
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
.
In contrast
, the town has preserved the bridge over the new lake.

At the present, the town has grown
dramatically
by 2021, containing
Consider using "all the".
all of the
new facilities. More
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
have
been built
on all sides with 200. 000 populations, and new infrastructure
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
in the southern part of the city. The narrow river running through the city has
been dammed
to create the large
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lake
that stretches for miles along the southern edge of the residential area.
Similarly
, they have
strategically
extended the business region
greatly
to the south side and includes on both sides of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lake
. It seems that another structure on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lake
has
been constructed
fairly
close to a
newly
built dam to the east. According to the plan, the airport has been more than doubled in size.
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IELTS academic Summarise the two map of a city before and after development.

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