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The given diagram illustrates the information about how waste glass bottles are recycled.

The given diagram illustrates the information about how waste glass bottles are recycled. lG3b
The given diagram illustrates the information about how waste glass bottles are recycled. Overview, it can be clearly seen that recycled the waste glass bottle process are complex and lengthy it is included survival steps had East l have on importance. Hindi first stage of recycling the waste glass bottles waste glass bottles are collected from different places and stored in the one particular place name of place is collection point next with the help of truck all the waste glass bottles are transported from for being watched all the glass bottles are washed under the high pressure water bottles are divided into three different colours such as clear green brown and are sent to glass factory in the glass factory borders are broken into pieces. Then and that glass pieces are fuelled under the high temperature near about 6 to 8 degree celsius in the next step mix 2 glass now liquid glass and recycled glass and given the proper shape of waters in the third stage waters are ready for being used and are sent to supermarket and ready for the sales again
The
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given
diagram illustrates the information about how
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waste
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glass
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bottles
are recycled
.

Overview, it can be
clearly
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seen
that recycled the
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waste
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glass
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bottle
process are complex and lengthy it
is included
survival steps had East l have on importance.

Hindi
first
stage of recycling the
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waste
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glass
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bottles
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waste
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glass
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bottles
are collected
from
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different
places and stored in the one particular place name of place is collection point
next
with the
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help
of truck all the
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waste
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glass
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bottles
are transported
from for being
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watched
all the
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glass
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bottles
are washed
under the high pressure water
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bottles
are divided
into three
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different
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colours
such as
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clear
green brown and are
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sent
to
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glass
factory in the
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glass
factory borders
are broken
into pieces.

Then and that
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glass
pieces
are fuelled
under the high temperature near about 6 to 8 degree
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celsius
in the
next
step mix 2
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glass
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now
liquid
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glass
and recycled
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glass
and
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given
the proper shape of waters in the third stage waters are ready for being
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used
and are
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sent
to supermarket and ready for the sales again
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IELTS academic The given diagram illustrates the information about how waste glass bottles are recycled.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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