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The plans below show a public park when it first opener in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show a public park when it first opener in 1920 and the same park today. VWWQ
The maps illustrates the comparison of the public park named Grange park in the year 1920 and today. Overall, Today the park has an addition of features like children's play, water feature, and Amphitheater for the concerts. Whereas, the only features constant are the entrance to the garden and a small rose garden. In 1920, The rectangular park had an entry from Arnold Avenue and Elson Street with a fountain situated in between the park surrounded by a rose garden on the right top side and a water pond for plants adjacent to it. At the right bottom side there was a small seating area along with Glasshouse. On the left hand side just near the fountain was a stage for musicians along with two rose gardens facing each other, and seating area on each corners of the garden. Today, the fountain in the middle is replaced by the rose garden surrounding seating areas, on the right side there is a children's play area which replaced the pond and a Cafe adjacent to it near the entrance.
The maps
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the comparison of the public
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park
named Grange
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park
in the year 1920 and
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today
.
Overall
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Today
the
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park
has an addition of features like children's play, water feature, and Amphitheater for the concerts. Whereas, the
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only
features constant are the entrance to the
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garden
and a
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small
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rose
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garden
. In 1920, The rectangular
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park
had an entry from Arnold Avenue and
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Elson
Street with a fountain situated in between the
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park
surrounded by a
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rose
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garden
on the right top side and a water pond for plants adjacent to it. At the right bottom side there was a
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small
seating
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area
along with Glasshouse. On the
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left hand
side
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just
near the fountain was a stage for musicians along with two
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rose
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gardens
facing each other, and seating
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area
on each
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of the
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garden
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Today
, the fountain in the middle
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rose
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garden
surrounding seating
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areas
, on the right side
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there is a children
's play
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which replaced the pond and a
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adjacent to it near the entrance.
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IELTS academic The plans below show a public park when it first opener in 1920 and the same park today.

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