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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. eDD7

The map illustrates the two possible sites for a new shopping complex in the city of Brandfield. The initial difference between two sites is that the first site is near a residential area, while the other is close to an industrial region. The first site (S1) is located to the north of the city between the residential area and the city centre. There are three infrastructure features (a river, a main road and a railway) around S1, thus, these transports may provide easy access from most part of the city, if a shopping mall is built in that area. The second site (S2) lies to the south-east end of the city and is fairly close to the downtown and the industrial part. The site is near two main roads and the railroad; however, has no residential part around the area. There is a large Golf Course and a park in the west side of the city, but both sites are not close to the given area.

The map illustrates the two possible You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 for a new shopping complex in the city of Possible spelling mistake found.Brand field
Brandfield
. The initial difference between two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 is that the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
 is near a residential area, while the other is close to an industrial region.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
first
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site
 (S1) is located
 to the north of the city between the residential area and the city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. There are three infrastructure features (a river, a main road and a railway) around S1, thus
, these transports may provide easy access from most part of the city, if a shopping mall is built
 in that area.

The second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
 (S2) lies to the south-east This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the city and is fairly
 close to the downtown and the industrial part. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
 is near two main roads and the railroad; however
, has no residential part around the area.

There is a large Golf Course and a park in the west side of the city, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 are not close to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 area. 