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The given diagram give information about process of getting driving licence.

The given diagram give information about process of getting driving licence. WYKgq

The diagram shows the process of taking driver's license in the US. Overall, it is apparent that the process comprises 7 steps, beginning with going to the driving license center and ending with getting a driver’s license. Another notable feature is that students need to pass an eyesight test, a written exam and drive in the road exam to get a driver license. At the beginning of the process, students have to come to the driving license center and fill in the form to apply. Then, ones must take an eyesight test and the result determine whether or not they can have a driver’s license. After passing the eyesight, candidates they have to pay a fee for a written exam. Subsequently, if ones pass the exam and the road exam, they receive a driver’s license. If students go in the opposite direction that they fail the exam more than three times, they need to pay the fees and take the test again.

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shows
 the process of taking driver's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharterrightexemptioncertificategrantconsent
license
 in the US.

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, it is apparent that the process comprises 7 steps, beginning with going to the driving You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharterrightexemptioncertificategrantconsent
license
 center and ending with getting a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoperatorjockeymotoristtrainerchauffeur
driver’s
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license
. Another notable feature is that students need to pass an eyesight This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
, a written exam and drive in the road exam to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoperatorjockeymotoristtrainerchauffeur
driver
 license.

At the beginning of the process, students This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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come
 to the driving You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharterrightexemptioncertificategrantconsent
license
 center and fill in the form to apply. Then, ones This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 take an eyesight This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 and the result determine Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether". It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.whether
whether or not
 they can have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoperatorjockeymotoristtrainerchauffeur
driver’s
 license.

After passing the eyesight, candidates they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay a fee for a written exam. Subsequently
, if ones pass the exam and the road exam, they receive a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoperatorjockeymotoristtrainerchauffeur
driver’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcharterrightexemptioncertificategrantconsent
license
. If students go in the opposite direction that they fail the exam more than three times, they need to pay the fees and take the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 again. 