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history of recycling in UK, Germany and France from the year 2007 to 2015

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The graph gives information about regional household recycling rates form the year 2005 to 2015. The countries in the chart are Germany, UK and England Overall we see an increasing trend in Germany and UK. England the rates declined till mid 2013 and then increased till 2015. In 2007 Germany started off with 20% and without much fluctuation it reached just below 60% by the end of 2015. A similar trend can be observed in UK, starting from nearly 35%, however the rates slowed down from the beginning of 2007 to the end of 2009 then it steadily increased till the end of 2015. In France the rates stood at peak value of 50% in 2007, declined to 30% during the mid of 2013 and then increased to 40% by the end of 2015.
The graph gives information about regional household recycling
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form the year 2005 to 2015. The countries in the chart are Germany, UK and England
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an increasing trend in Germany and UK. England the
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declined till mid 2013 and then increased till 2015. In 2007 Germany
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off with 20% and without much fluctuation it reached
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below 60% by the
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of 2015. A similar trend can
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in UK, starting from
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slowed down from the beginning of 2007 to the
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of 2009 then it
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increased till the
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of 2015. In France the
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stood at peak value of 50% in 2007, declined to 30% during the mid of 2013 and then increased to 40% by the
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IELTS academic history of recycling in UK, Germany and France from the year 2007 to 2015

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