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The given diagram describes the working of a water rocket launcher

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The figure highlights the how water rocket launcher process material used as soda bottle, add soap lather and so on. Overall, what stands out is that cyclic process chart has two methods the first method is dry ice launch and second method is garden hose. Starting from soda bottle and ending at launch. Looking at the first method, first step is soda bottle, in bottles add dry ice launched and add ice pads, then soda bottle filled with co² gas compressor. It helps to compress the pressure as well as they used launch cylinder plus safety valve then the water rocket launcher do not work and the mission abort. Lastly, without using safety valve, only use pressured water then the water rocket launched.
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,
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is garden hose. Starting from
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dry ice launched and
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ice pads, then
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gas compressor. It
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to compress the pressure
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launch cylinder plus safety valve then the
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rocket launcher do not work and the mission abort.
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rocket launched.

IELTS academic The given diagram describes the working of a water rocket launcher

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1 paragraphs
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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