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The given circular chart depicts the information about yearly expenditure by local officials in someland from 1980 to 2000.

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The given circular chart depicts the information about yearly expenditure by local officials in someland from 1980 to 2000. The information is given in porportion. As it presented, in 1980, more than one third of the total expenditure was on higher education. It increased by 10% in 1990 but fell down by 5% in the year 2000. Spending on K-12 education declined throughout the years. It decreased from 25% in 1980 in 18% in 2000. Furthermore, The investment on transportation fluctuated. It fell down from 16% in 1980 to 6% in 1990 However, it inclined by 6% in the year 2000. Certainly investment in heakth secore. hike to 20% in 1990 that is 20%. But declined in year pf 1980 and 2000. Expenditure in environmental services were inclined in year 2000 by 9% and the yearly investment in other socers dimnished till the 2000. Overall, the maximum spendings by government in the field of higher education whereas the minimum. investment by authorities in the other sectors
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As it presented, in 1980, more than one third of the total expenditure was on higher education. It increased by 10% in 1990
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fell down by 5% in the
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2000. Spending on K-12 education declined throughout the years. It decreased from 25% in 1980 in 18% in 2000.
Furthermore
, The
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investment
on transportation fluctuated. It fell down from 16% in 1980 to 6% in 1990
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, it inclined by 6% in the
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year
2000.

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investment
in
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heakth
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hike
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declined in
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pf 1980 and 2000. Expenditure in environmental services
were inclined
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2000 by 9% and the yearly
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in other
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socers
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dimnished
till the 2000.

Overall
, the maximum
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government
in the field of higher education whereas the minimum.
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investment
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IELTS academic The given circular chart depicts the information about yearly expenditure by local officials in someland from 1980 to 2000.

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6.0
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